1st Draft of my product

Rado adverts.

Here are two versions of my radio advert that i'm using for a first draft. I've played around with different songs to go with them however i'm undecided as yet, so i've left them without for now. They are slightly different and both have strengths and weaknesses and in due course I may totally re-record them with a new script to adapt to my film, however for now this is what i've got.